Translation --- Draft 2

TV Programs

It is important to choose TV programs carefully. Though
TV is the major way to offer information and entertainments,
it may have some defects. Some programs which have violence
and lust are harm to teenagers. It is also bad for your eyesight
to spend too much time watching TV . Therefore, we should
make choices of TV programs that are good for your health.
And the most essential thing is that don't be a tellyholic.


The Busy School Life

I am in a busy school life all the time. I am expected to enter a
university when I become a high school student. As a result of
the college entrance exam which is very competitive, I am asked
to study all day long. The pressure of schoolwork is a big responsibility
for me. That's why I am on the hop not only at school but also at home.
Beside, I also have to give up the activities that I love to do very much.
Finally, I wish I can have a colorful school life.

Translation --- Draft 1

TV Programs

It is important to choose TV programs carefully. Though
TV is the major way to offer information and entertainments,
but, it may have some defects. Some programs which have
violence and lust is harm to teenagers. It is also bad for your
eyesight to spend too much time watching TV . Therefore,
we should make choices of TV programs that are good for
your health. And the most essential thing is that don't be a
tellyholic.


The Busy School Life

I am in a busy school life all the time. I am expected to enter a
university when I become a high school student. As a result of
the college entrance exam which is very competitive, I am asked
to study all day long. The pressure of shoolwork is a big responsibility
for me. That's why I am not only on the hop not only at school but also
at home. Beside, I also have to give up the activities that I love to do
every much. Finally, I wish I can have a colorful school life.

Be Determined to Amend --- Draft 2

Joe used to be a bovver boy. He joined a ring. And he was sent
to prison because of a bank robbery several years ago.

His sister, Sue, went to the prison to visit him one day.
Sue picked up the transmitter and said,“I will tell you a bad news.
You should try to be calm.”
Joe asked her tensely,“Bad news? What?”
Sue cried and continued,“Father passed away by his heart
disease. He called your name until he expired. His last wish
is to look you to be affranchised.”
Joe was greatly taken aback by this big bad news and he sat
there without saying a word. Then, he started to weep.
And his sister said,“You must be determined to amend and to
be discharged from prison, or you will not to treat father fairly!”
Joe answered seriously,“I will. I promise I will release on parole
soon.”

After few months later, Joe was just as expected to parole. And he
went to his father's grave, kowtowing to him.

Be Determined to Amend --- Draft 1

Joe used to be a bovver boy. He was sent to prison because
of a robbery several years ago.

His sister, Sue, went to the prison to visit him one day.
Sue picked up the transmitter and said,“There is a bad news.”
Joe asked her tensely,“Bad news? What?”
Sue cried and continued,“Father passed away by his heart
disease. He called your name until he expired. His last wish
is to look you to be affranchised.”
Joe was greatly taken aback by this big bad news and he sat
there without saying a word.
And his sister said,“You must be determined to amend and to
be discharged from prison, or you will not to treat father fairly!”
Joe answered seriously,“I will. I promise I will released on parole
soon.”

After few months later, Joe is just as expected to parole.

Tips for Staying Healthy --- Draft 2

Everyone wants to be healthy. But, what ways can make us
become healthy? There are some tips.

We can start from drink and food first. Eating more vegetables
and fruits which are good for our bodies instead eating junk
food or fast food. Drinking more water is much better than
drinking beverages which have too much sugar. Next, we should
exercise regularly. And we have to do exercise three days a week
at least. It can make us have more physical strength and maintain
our stature. To have a breezy personality is also important.
We have to be optimistic when we do everything. Because, it can
make us enjoy doing things. Therefore, we will not complain and
effect our mood.

Being healthy is very important. So, remember, we have to take after
ourselves and follow the tips from the top.