An Unforgettable Experience --- Draft 2

It was the first time that I went to a haunted house which frightened me so much. A few years ago, my aunt, cousin and I went to a haunted house. It is different from other haunted house I had visited before. This time, I had to walk into it by myself instead of sitting in a car. After we lined up for five minutes, it was our turn. We walked into a dark access with fearfulness. All of a sudden, a bloody face appeared in front of us, we were scared greatly and screamed out loudly. After that, we were feared by the terrible ghost again and again in the long journey of the haunted house. While we were exhausted , we saw a door which seemed like the exit. However, when we opened the door, we saw a person who pretended like a bride ghost. We knew that she must scare us. So, we took a deep breath and walked in front of her quickly. Just as expected, as soon as she stood up, we were startled by her. Then, we started to run to the exit, but she followed behind us and there was a chopper in her hand. Finally, we ran out the haunted house by the with all our strength. We were safe!!

On our way home, my aunt wondered why we spent money frightening ourselves, and we also found my cousin's arms had some scratches. Even though this experience of haunted house is not very enjoy, I still want to go to the haunted house next time.