NO.8

This is Phoebe Lee's writing class blog.

Thursday, April 26, 2007

Autobiography (part two) --- Draft 1

I think most people had good grades when they were in elementary school. So did I. But, as a result of the harder schoolwork, my grades became middling in my class when I was in junior high school. I was not good at science course, on the other hand, I did well in arts. In addition, I was a student which teachers liked to ask me to do some employments. And I also appointed to be a swearer in athletic meeting. I felt honor and I was trained to be responsible. When I was a junior high school student, I joined the Chinese music club. We went to many places to perform. These experience made me not to have stage-fright. Now, I study in Tainan National Commercial Vocational Senior High School. I choose the Department of Applied Foreign Language. We have many English classes to improve our listening, speaking, reading, and writing. And we had many competitions like English songs or English drama contest. My class participate the national English drama contest last year. We won th fifth place. I played a character in the drama, and I enjoyed standing on the stage very much. "Union is strength." I learned the meaning of this saying from this event. I also acquired how to express a role. Until now, I think my school life is very colorful. I made many friends. Furthermore, I will keep doing so in my college life and even I started to work.

I hope I can enter a good technical university after I graduate from high school. And if I were lucky, I wish I can go aboard to study. Then, I will becaome a translator or a tour guide and traveling around the world. However, before these aspirations come true, I need to make my all efforts. I will do my best and keep moving forward!

6 Comments:

  • At 7:55 PM , Blogger 娜娜 said...

    Great! I really hope your dream will come true very soon.

     
  • At 10:38 AM , Blogger 美萱 said...

    "I was not good at science course, on the other hand, I did well in arts." change to " I was not good at science course. On the other hand, I did well in arts."

     
  • At 10:44 AM , Blogger candy said...

    Just do your best! ^ ^

     
  • At 10:48 AM , Blogger Dora said...

    "These experience" shoulde write "These experiences".

    "Then, I will becaome a translator or a tour guide and traveling around the world."
    The "becaome" should write "become".

     
  • At 11:17 AM , Blogger  said...

    Try your best.You can do it.

     
  • At 7:49 PM , Blogger Fanny said...

    Nothing is difficult to a man who wills

     

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