Tips for Staying Healthy --- Draft 1
Everyone want to be healthy. But, what ways can make us
become healthy? There are some tips.
We can start from drink and food first. Eating more vegetable
and fruits which are good for our body instead eating junk
food or fast food. Drinking more water is much better than
drinking beverages which have a lot of suger. Next, we should
exercise regularly. And we have to do exercise three days a week
at least. It can make us have more physical strength and maintain
our stature. To have a breezy personality is also important.
We have to be optimistic when we do everything. Because, it can
make us enjoy doing things. Therefore, we will not complain and
effect our mood.
Being healthy is very important. So, remember, we have to take after
ourself and followthe tips from the top.
become healthy? There are some tips.
We can start from drink and food first. Eating more vegetable
and fruits which are good for our body instead eating junk
food or fast food. Drinking more water is much better than
drinking beverages which have a lot of suger. Next, we should
exercise regularly. And we have to do exercise three days a week
at least. It can make us have more physical strength and maintain
our stature. To have a breezy personality is also important.
We have to be optimistic when we do everything. Because, it can
make us enjoy doing things. Therefore, we will not complain and
effect our mood.
Being healthy is very important. So, remember, we have to take after
ourself and followthe tips from the top.
posted by Phoebe Lee @ 7:45 PM
8 Comments:
At 11:43 AM ,
candy said...
do you have exercise regularly...?
and don't always eat junk food....
you will keep in a good condition.
Everyone >>>單數 所以want...需要加s
At 11:45 AM ,
Fanny said...
"followthe" change into "follow the"
At 11:46 AM ,
Estella said...
what ways 還是有點怪 改一下吧
雖然我也想不到更好的="=
which have too much sugar應該會比
which have a lot of sugar更強調一點
At 11:49 AM ,
娜娜 said...
*Eating more vegetable and fruits *
should change to * Eating more vegetables and fruits *.
At 11:50 AM ,
Jenny said...
"Everyone want to be healthy." "want" should add "s".Because "everyone" is a singular noun.
At 9:27 PM ,
美萱 said...
"and fruits which are good for our body instead eating junk food or fast food." should change into "and fruits which are good for our bodies instead of eating junk food or fast food."
At 10:05 PM ,
Dora said...
"Drinking more water is much better than drinking beverages which have a lot of *suger. "
*suger should write "sugar".
"So, remember, we have to take after *ourself and followthe tips from the top. "
*ourself should write "ourselves".
At 9:12 PM ,
瑾 said...
Everyone is 單數名詞。
"Everyone want to be healthy. But, what ways can make us
become healthy? There are some tips." I think you should change this sentence.
"vegetable"you can add "s".
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