My Bedroom---Draft 1
My bedroom is rather small but warm.
When you enter my room, you will see my bed first.
The bed is my favorite place in my room, because I can
lie and sleep on it . Next, a big bookshelf is on the wall
on the right side of the bed, and you can also see my
guitar under the bookshelf. My desk is set on the right
wall of my room. There is a window next to my desk.
On the other hand, my dresser is set on the left wall of
my room.
It is approximately my bedroom’s setting.
When you enter my room, you will see my bed first.
The bed is my favorite place in my room, because I can
lie and sleep on it . Next, a big bookshelf is on the wall
on the right side of the bed, and you can also see my
guitar under the bookshelf. My desk is set on the right
wall of my room. There is a window next to my desk.
On the other hand, my dresser is set on the left wall of
my room.
It is approximately my bedroom’s setting.

7 Comments:
At 11:36 AM ,
candy said...
"on the other hand" 是說 另一方面
You can say "And the other side"
At 11:43 AM ,
Dora said...
"The bed is my favorite place in my room, because I can
lie and sleep on it." I think the "," can be erased.
At 11:46 AM ,
娜娜 said...
*It is approximately my bedroom's setting.*
I don't know what you mean in this
sentences.
But when I read you article I don't think your room is small.
It's ok.
At 12:01 PM ,
Fanny said...
It seems that your room is small.
But it must very comfortable!
At 11:30 AM ,
美萱 said...
Good.
My bed is my favorite place in my room, too.
At 12:03 PM ,
Jenny said...
your bedroom is small, but it's really confortable.
At 8:20 PM ,
瑾 said...
Why you use "on the other hand", this is a conjunction.You can try to say other words.
Your bed looks like very comfortable, I hope can lie on it.
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