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This is Phoebe Lee's writing class blog.

Tuesday, December 19, 2006

An Embarrassing Experience---Draft 1

An very embarrassing experience happend when I was at nineth grade.

In junior high school, because we would have a big exam for entering
a higher school, we had to stay at school to study until 9:00 p.m.

One day, I felt stomach upset when everyone in my classroom were
studying quietly at about 8 o'clock p.m. And a few minutes later, I wanted
to fart. I tried to forbear to fart. But it's too late, I farted. It was loudly.
And the worst was that there was a boy sit next to me. I felt very
embarrassed and my face became very red quickly.

I think nobody could be more embarrassed than me!

7 Comments:

  • At 11:33 AM , Blogger 娜娜 said...

    Poor of you.
    *my face became very red quickly.*
    *became* you use *turn* is better.

     
  • At 5:33 PM , Blogger Fanny said...

    How poor a girl it is!
    God blesses you!

     
  • At 6:43 PM , Blogger Dora said...

    "An very embarrassing experience happend when I was at nineth grade."
    "An" should change to "A".

     
  • At 9:57 PM , Blogger Jenny said...

    "An very embarrassing experience happend when I was at nineth grade." You can change to "A pretty embarrassing experience happened to me when I was at nineth grade."

     
  • At 11:12 PM , Blogger 美萱 said...

    "An very embarrassing experience happend when I was at nineth grade."
    "happend" should change into "happened"

     
  • At 11:32 AM , Blogger candy said...

    That's ok! That farting is a normal thing.

     
  • At 8:14 PM , Blogger  said...

    Bless you!
    But it's pasted.

     

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