An Embarrassing Experience---Draft 1
An very embarrassing experience happend when I was at nineth grade.
In junior high school, because we would have a big exam for entering
a higher school, we had to stay at school to study until 9:00 p.m.
One day, I felt stomach upset when everyone in my classroom were
studying quietly at about 8 o'clock p.m. And a few minutes later, I wanted
to fart. I tried to forbear to fart. But it's too late, I farted. It was loudly.
And the worst was that there was a boy sit next to me. I felt very
embarrassed and my face became very red quickly.
I think nobody could be more embarrassed than me!
In junior high school, because we would have a big exam for entering
a higher school, we had to stay at school to study until 9:00 p.m.
One day, I felt stomach upset when everyone in my classroom were
studying quietly at about 8 o'clock p.m. And a few minutes later, I wanted
to fart. I tried to forbear to fart. But it's too late, I farted. It was loudly.
And the worst was that there was a boy sit next to me. I felt very
embarrassed and my face became very red quickly.
I think nobody could be more embarrassed than me!

7 Comments:
At 11:33 AM ,
娜娜 said...
Poor of you.
*my face became very red quickly.*
*became* you use *turn* is better.
At 5:33 PM ,
Fanny said...
How poor a girl it is!
God blesses you!
At 6:43 PM ,
Dora said...
"An very embarrassing experience happend when I was at nineth grade."
"An" should change to "A".
At 9:57 PM ,
Jenny said...
"An very embarrassing experience happend when I was at nineth grade." You can change to "A pretty embarrassing experience happened to me when I was at nineth grade."
At 11:12 PM ,
美萱 said...
"An very embarrassing experience happend when I was at nineth grade."
"happend" should change into "happened"
At 11:32 AM ,
candy said...
That's ok! That farting is a normal thing.
At 8:14 PM ,
瑾 said...
Bless you!
But it's pasted.
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