NO.8

This is Phoebe Lee's writing class blog.

Sunday, February 25, 2007

Go to Penny's Home

Today, I was very exciting. Because I would go to
Penny's home in 六甲 country. So, I woke up earlier
and get ready to take bus to Tainan train station.

We seven people took train to our terminus, 隆田 station.
And then, Penny's uncle drove us to Penny's home.
We thanked Penny's uncle especially, because he drove
us to go there and back. Penny and her grandparents
welcame us with great enthusiasm when we arrived.

We barbecued in backyard. There was a runnel which could
wash anything, and we paddle in it. We also saw an extent
of farm and breathed fresh air. We all had a great time.
And we hoped we could go there next time.

2 Comments:

  • At 9:32 PM , Blogger 美萱 said...

    "get ready to take bus to Tainan train station.", "get" should change into "got"
    It must be interesting and unfortettable.

     
  • At 11:14 PM , Blogger Dora said...

    "Penny and her grandparents *welcame us with great enthusiasm when we arrived."
    *welcame should write "welcomed".

     

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