NO.8

This is Phoebe Lee's writing class blog.

Tuesday, April 17, 2007

Autobiography (part one) --- Draft 1

My name is Yun-Yi, Lee, a seventeen-year-old girl. I was born in Tainan, An-Ping. There are four people in my family.My father is a worker, my mother is a career woman. I also have a sister who is two-year older than me. She and I are very closed, but she went to college last year. And, my parents often pay attention to my grades. That makes me feel under pressure but I work harder and try to accord with what they expected. However, I always have a optimistic attitude, and I almost laugh loudly every day. So, I will not bottle my bad mood to
the depths of my heart. I live happily day after day.

According to what people usually say, "The child who learns music will not be naughty." I learned two instruments. One is "er hu", a two-stringed violin that I used to play it in the Chinese music club when I was in junior high school. Another is guitar which I like playing it while I sing a song. I also like to drawing pictrues. In stead of drawing a formal painting, I usually love to scrawl. Except for these puiet activies, I like to play volley ball and basketball, too. Though I am not good at them, I think I can make myself become more heathier by doing these exercises. There are so many things that I always do, and I am able to release my pressure or relax myself.

8 Comments:

  • At 7:25 PM , Blogger Fanny said...

    You have done a fine job!
    no wonder you always laugh so happy with "a–ma"

     
  • At 6:32 PM , Blogger 娜娜 said...

    Yeah keep in a good mood will make you more healthy.

     
  • At 2:51 PM , Blogger 美萱 said...

    " In stead of drawing a formal painting, ", " In stead " should be "Instead"

     
  • At 10:00 PM , Blogger Jenny said...

    "She and I are very closed,""very" should change into "much".
    "I also like to drawing pictrues.""pictrues" should change into "pictures".
    "I think I can make myself become more heathier by doing these exercises." I think "I think I can make myself become much healthier by doing these exercises." is better.

     
  • At 9:21 PM , Blogger  said...

    "er hu"!! I await your music.

     
  • At 11:11 AM , Blogger Dora said...

    "Yun-Yi, Lee" change to "Yun-Yi Lee" is better.

    "volley ball" should write "volleyball".

     
  • At 6:00 PM , Blogger candy said...

    your familly is very cute and you are really a happy girl . Let us live in a good mood every day.

     
  • At 8:59 PM , Blogger Estella said...

    special "er hu"...

    it doesn't have english name?

    you didn't tell me it before-.-

     

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