Translation --- Draft 1
TV Programs
It is important to choose TV programs carefully. Though
TV is the major way to offer information and entertainments,
but, it may have some defects. Some programs which have
violence and lust is harm to teenagers. It is also bad for your
eyesight to spend too much time watching TV . Therefore,
we should make choices of TV programs that are good for
your health. And the most essential thing is that don't be a
tellyholic.
The Busy School Life
I am in a busy school life all the time. I am expected to enter a
university when I become a high school student. As a result of
the college entrance exam which is very competitive, I am asked
to study all day long. The pressure of shoolwork is a big responsibility
for me. That's why I am not only on the hop not only at school but also
at home. Beside, I also have to give up the activities that I love to do
every much. Finally, I wish I can have a colorful school life.
It is important to choose TV programs carefully. Though
TV is the major way to offer information and entertainments,
but, it may have some defects. Some programs which have
violence and lust is harm to teenagers. It is also bad for your
eyesight to spend too much time watching TV . Therefore,
we should make choices of TV programs that are good for
your health. And the most essential thing is that don't be a
tellyholic.
The Busy School Life
I am in a busy school life all the time. I am expected to enter a
university when I become a high school student. As a result of
the college entrance exam which is very competitive, I am asked
to study all day long. The pressure of shoolwork is a big responsibility
for me. That's why I am not only on the hop not only at school but also
at home. Beside, I also have to give up the activities that I love to do
every much. Finally, I wish I can have a colorful school life.
posted by Phoebe Lee @ 11:31 AM
7 Comments:
At 12:03 PM ,
Dora said...
"Though TV is the major way to offer information and entertainments,but, it may have some defects. "
If you write "Though", you don't need to write "but".
At 7:36 PM ,
Jenny said...
"The pressure of shoolwork is a big responsibility
for me.""shoolwork" should change into "schoolwork".
At 9:26 PM ,
娜娜 said...
*I am not only on the hop not only at school but also* should change to *I am not only on the hop at school but also*
At 10:37 AM ,
candy said...
that I love to do
every much.
every much should change "very much"
At 10:52 AM ,
美萱 said...
Everybody writes the same topic,so I have nothing to say.
You write well.
At 10:55 AM ,
Fanny said...
"I am not only on the hop not only at school but also
at home."
maybe you can change into
"I am on the hop not only at school but also
at home."
At 10:58 AM ,
瑾 said...
From your writing I learn a new word"tellyholic".
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