Be Determined to Amend --- Draft 1

Joe used to be a bovver boy. He was sent to prison because
of a robbery several years ago.

His sister, Sue, went to the prison to visit him one day.
Sue picked up the transmitter and said,“There is a bad news.”
Joe asked her tensely,“Bad news? What?”
Sue cried and continued,“Father passed away by his heart
disease. He called your name until he expired. His last wish
is to look you to be affranchised.”
Joe was greatly taken aback by this big bad news and he sat
there without saying a word.
And his sister said,“You must be determined to amend and to
be discharged from prison, or you will not to treat father fairly!”
Joe answered seriously,“I will. I promise I will released on parole
soon.”

After few months later, Joe is just as expected to parole.