An Unforgettable Experience --- Draft 1

It was the first time that I went to a haunted house which frightened me so much. A few years ago, my anut, cousin and I went to a haunted house, it is different from the other haunted house I had visted before. This time, I had to walk into it by myself instead of sitting in a car. After we lined up for five minutes, it was our turn. We walked into a dark access with fearfulness. All of a sudden, a scary face appeared in front of us, we were scared greatly. After that, we were feared by the terrible ghost again and again in the long journey of the haunted house. While we were dead beat , we saw door which seemed like the exit. However, when we opened the door, we saw a person who pretended like a bride ghost. We knew that she would scare us withour doubt. So, we took a deep breathe and walked in front of her quickly. Just as expected, as soon as she stood up, we was startled by her. Then, we started to run to the exit, but she followed behind us and there was a chopper in her hand. Finally, we ran out the haunted house by the skin of our teeth. We were safe!!

On our way home, my aunt said that we spent money frightening ourself, and we also found my cousin's arms had some scratches. Even though this experience of haunted house is not very enjoy, I thind I will go to the haunted house next time.