NO.8

This is Phoebe Lee's writing class blog.

Thursday, June 14, 2007

Making Decisions --- Draft 1

Growing up means making my own decisions. I think it is a process that everyone must experience. When you become an adult, you can think things carefully and decide to do anything without parents' help. Even though you make a wrong choice, you can be responsible to face the problem. As a saying goes, "To look before you leap." Making a right choice is very important.


The hardest decision that I ever made was whether I should go to cram school or not. About two months ago, because my bad grade in the midterm exam, my mom asked me to go to cram school. Just in the time, the cram schools teachers call me very often. At first, I had desire to go to cram school and I inquired my classmates who had gone to cram school already some information of cram school. In this period of time, I thought this big question all the time. But, as a result of many aspects of cram school, such as expensive tuition, having less time for myself to study, I decided not to go to cram school finally. I hoped it is a correct decision!

8 Comments:

  • At 11:52 PM , Blogger 美萱 said...

    Making a correct decision is not easy, isn't it?
    So we should think carefully before making a decision.

     
  • At 10:30 AM , Blogger Dora said...

    "the cram schools teachers call me very often"-->"the cram school's teachers"

     
  • At 10:35 AM , Blogger Jenny said...

    "When you become an adult, you can think things carefully and decide to do anything without parents' help." change into "When you become an adult, you can think carefully and decide to do anything without parents' opinions." is better.

     
  • At 10:36 AM , Blogger candy said...

    Just in the time, the cram schools teachers call me very often

    是不是要用過去式 called

     
  • At 10:40 AM , Blogger Fanny said...

    Studying by your own is very great!
    Go for it!

     
  • At 10:45 AM , Blogger 娜娜 said...

    I hope you can did right decision.

     
  • At 11:17 AM , Blogger Butterfly said...

    1.the cram schools teachers call me very often用過去式

    2.I had desire to go to cram school and I inquired my classmates 我覺得desire直接用動詞就好了

    3.But, as a result of many aspects of cram school, such as expensive tuition, having less time for myself to study, I decided not to go to cram school finally.那個but是連接詞後面不用逗點,我覺得such as前面逗點怪怪的

     
  • At 11:54 AM , Blogger FawnYma said...

    小姐小姐別生氣,下次再給妳喔!

     

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