Well-balanced Diet --- Draft 1
Well-balanced diet is important to me. Being a three-grade high school student, I must have lots of strength to cope with many coming exams. By eating balanced diet, I can gain many kinds of nutritions from what I eat everyday. With them, I must be able to be energetic enough to focus on my studies. After that, when I consume these nutrious food into my stomach, the immunity in my body are developed. So that, I will have less chance to come down with sickness. At last, I want to make the habit of not being picky and learn to eat every kinds of vegetables and fruits. Nevertheless, it is hard to assimilate sufficient nutritions everyday. In order to keep my health healthy, I'll try my best to carry out well-balanced diet.

4 Comments:
At 5:51 PM ,
FawnYma said...
1.the "immunities" in my body are developed.
2.So that I will have "fewer" "chances" to come down with sickness.
3.keep my "body" healthy
美麗的y-ma到此一遊~
YA!我是第一個!
At 8:53 PM ,
Dora said...
everyday-->every day
At 6:55 PM ,
Jenny said...
"After that, when I consume these nutrious food into my stomach, the immunity in my body are developed." "nutrious" should change to "nutritious".
"At last, I want to make the habit of not being picky and learn to eat every kinds of vegetables and fruits." "kinds" should change to "kind".
At 9:07 PM ,
Fanny said...
"eating balanced diet"
can change into
"eating balanced diets" or
"eating a balanced diet"
(Wow!好美麗阿!)
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